Good reasons given for your choices here, Aaron. You show an awareness of why a particular word is inappropriate. It would be useful to look at the 'Taste and Decency' question (no. 4) at www.editorscode.org.uk/faqs.html and explore that website a little further. That would help you explain whether the choice is voluntary or forced on the editor.
I like the way you give a reason why XiaoLong is a good choice but you give further reasons where you explain why it is your first choice. Well done but improve your mark by giving good background info on the taste and decency issue.
Good reasons given for your choices here, Aaron. You show an awareness of why a particular word is inappropriate. It would be useful to look at the 'Taste and Decency' question (no. 4) at www.editorscode.org.uk/faqs.html and explore that website a little further. That would help you explain whether the choice is voluntary or forced on the editor.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you give a reason why XiaoLong is a good choice but you give further reasons where you explain why it is your first choice. Well done but improve your mark by giving good background info on the taste and decency issue.